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The Jetsons EXTREME

Posted by Frenzy - August 25th, 2007


The Jetsons get kicked out of their house because Mr. Jetson gets fired because he and his friend crashed a hover jet into an gas tanker, and then his friend lit a cigarette, which he then threw in the fire, to Mr. Jetson's protests. It lights the factory on fire, but luckily everyone escapes.

Mr. Jetson's boss asks who started the fire, and the firend blames Mr. Jetson, who, despite his protests, is fired and hauled off to jail. His family pays the bail and he is back home in no time. He takes out a phone book and calls his friend and asks him to take the blame, but his friend refuses, and hangs up.

Mr. Jetson is forced to bring his family into a shelter for the homeless and then goes looking for another job. He is eventually employed as a computer engineer for the rich TYRANTCO. corporation. He works there for two years and mages to buy his house back, however he then learns that since his being fired, his friend that framed him has gone on to wealth and fame, and he also owns TYRANTCO., for which Mr. Jetson still works for.

Mr. Jetson goes to his boss and demands to see the head of the company. He is laughed at and thrown out, but is not fired. He then remembers the phone book he had 2 years ago. He takes it out, and, hoping the number is correct, hears the phone ringing.

His friend's wife picks up the phone and asks who it is. He says it is an old friend, and can he please speak to Thomas Delfonso (that's his friend's name). She says he isn't home, and he asks her to have him call him back. She complies and they both hang up at exactly same time.

He waits anxiously at the phone all day (it's a Saturday). He recieves several calls, but none from Thomas. He waits there all weekend and is then forced to go to work by his wife and children.

Mr. Jetson develops an obsession about Thomas Delfonso and slowly begins going crazy. One day he lights his desk on fire and throws the contents all over the building. During this process he wounds several people. He is then fired and sent to jail once again, where his family pays the bail, once again.

Three days later he recieves the call. Mr. Jetson disguises himself as a home designer and lies that he is going to redo their kitchen and wants his address. Delfonso suspiciously gives him their address and hangs up.

Mr. Jetson drives there right away and arrives at 3:30 in the morning. He packed a duffel bag with 3 pistols, 2 grenades (one fragmentation and one smoke) and a sniper rifle, and a pair of night-vision goggles. He throws a smoke grenade threw their window and knocks out both of them. He shoots their door open with a silenced pistol and walks in. He shoots Delfonso's wife, who is barely conscious, and then takes Delfonso out from his room. He is wearing a black balaclava, so Delfonso can't see him.

He knocks Delfonso out by punching him and then starts prying out the floorboards. Smoke has started seeping from the broken window and the fire department comes. Mr. Jetson disgusies himself as Thomas Delfonso by wearing his clothes and hairpiece and says that he fixing his toaster and smoke started come out. He then threw it out the window because it got hot. He says that he went down and got the toaster and brought it back into his house and finally fixed it, and then he says that he doesn't want any help. Although they don't appear to believe his story, they drive away, saying, "Well, it's his house."

Delfnso awakens shortly after this. Mr. Jetson shoots both his legs with the silenced pistol and puts him in the spot where the floor boards were. He then asks him, "Do you know you I am?" Delfonso whereily shakes his head and Mr. Jetson pulls off his mask. He then starts nailing the floorboards down. Delfonso tries to escape, but Mr. Jetson knocks him out again.

Delfonso awakens to total blackness. He notices a weight on his chest and realizes that it is a flashlight. He also sees a note to the right of him reading, 'Who's the burner now?' It appears to be written in blood. He then realizes he is chained (by the left leg) to a metal post under the floorboards. There is a gun with a single shot left in it next to the note. He flips the note over and reads,

'You can try and shoot the chain
But then there will be much pain"

Mr. Jetson signed his name to it, and dated it, too.

He ponders the idea for a while and then succumbs to the thought of escaping and shoots the chain. He misses. He then starts screaming for someone to help, but no one does. He dies 6 days later of starvation. During those six days, he started ripping apart his arm and eating it, but he vomited and realized he was dying of blood loss so just 'lay there, and died.'

Seven years later the police find him when the house is torn down. He is a skeleton, but the note, dusty and crimpled, still lies there. They realize that this is what happened to Thomas Delfonso and arrest Mr. Jetson at his house (he is now a rich billionaire, who owns a Medical Facility Devoted to Treating Cancer Victims and discovering new cures for cancer), Mr. Jetosn shoots two police officers, but one manages to be merely shot in the leg and requires reinforcements. The police surround his house. Mr. Jetson goes haywire and shoots his son and daughter, then chops his wifes leg off with a butcher knife and throws into the crowd around his house. He stabs his wife in the head and throws her, and his 2 children, out the window too. He then jumps out the window himself, firing widly into the crowd. Before the police can get to him, however, he shoots himself in the head.

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This story is (c) copyright 2007 Frenzy. %u2122

Link: http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/71 8892


Comments

thats a pretty fucked up story you made there frenzy. that still doesnt mean its not good.

lol

thanks

i think