Plot needs more explaining
First thought: WOAH ORANGECLOCK IS A GIRL! After that initial bit of surprise, I found a weird plot involving a guy with a bomb for a head. Great graphics, use of music and sound effects, however. I wouldn't have made OrangeClock a girl, however, and maybe explain the plot a bit more- I didn't even get it for the most part.
Happy Clock Day!
Simply the pre-loader SBC with some flames behind him and writing. While not a bad submission, it really didn't have any sort of plot, or any sound, aside from the ripping sound at the beginning of the pre-loader. Add a plot next time.
Why should a tribute that's not even a minute long have a plot?
I wasn't very fond of the music at the beginning, but the idea was pretty funny. It was pretty short, however, as the other reviewer said, and the plot could be improved, such as having some speech.
I found it really hard to get Strawberry t jump any more than twice, because he kept flying off in all directions. Add to that the fact that he's minuscule, and this game becomes nearly impossible. What happens when you touch the B anyway?
When you get to B... NOTHING HAPPENS AT ALL!
But whatever, it's impossible anyway.
A Review (get it?)
Well that was very interesting. I might have made the A red and not black, just so it fit with B better. I can't really say anything else about this Flash... maybe add some sound, animation, etc.?
Review of B's
The B's looked cool with the black shadow on them, and I like that you went with red on white. However, there was no p-reloader, and this Flash didn't really go anywhere. I was also slightly underwhelmed by the number of B's.
Not a bad animation, but instead of using a picture of StrawberryClock, you should animate him. The voicework wasn't bad, what with the computer voice, but the plot was extremely linear.
Cool pre-loader- a spin on the traditional Clock Day '09 pre-loader. The actual Flash was very weird- it was a bunch of clocks flying across the screen with some weird audio tracks in the background and text in the background too.
Great, but too sensitive controls
The graphics were great, and the music fit the game very well. However, the controls were extremely sensitive, as some other people have pointed out. This made jumping very hard. However, there is obviously a lot of effort put into this, so good job in that respect.
Looking back I see your point, it is a little too sensitive and jumping sometimes does feel a liittle clunky.
Thanks for the feedback and advice. Much appreciated.
Well this was certainly interesting. Looking at all these B's in one place is very interesting. I like that you went with the classic white background, and red Times New Roman font. Cool Flash.
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