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This is a good idea. The main menu didn't look very good, and neither did the Flash itself. But, I guess that's not really what this flash is about. The poem was good, and also having a 'Help' section was a good idea. Overall, a good idea, you just need to present it a little better.
7/10
~ Z
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I think that, together with the lack of animation, the presentation of my movie is probably the most commom complain it has... ironicly, since I actually gave a fair shot in the attempt to make things look interesting (the help menu, for example) and tried to polish things before submiting. But it's also an accurate comment, because even I could see that it had flaws when I submited. Thanks for the compliments and the review!
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This flash had an interesting animation style. I like the ending, I thought that it was really good. The flash seemed slightly messy in places, most notably when he is at his computer; that scene could use some polishing. However, it was a good movie, and its obvious that you put a lot of work into it. Good job!
7/10
~ Z
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Interesting game. The presentation wasn't that great; it didn't really look polished. However, it's neat idea, so if you expand on this you may have a great game here. The music also randomly changed depending on waht box I pressed on. Maybe just having a music selector would be better.
6/10
~ Z
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- Interesting graphical style
- Sound wasn't bad
- Odd idea
- No plot really
- Short
- When you press the REPLAY button at the end, the sound plays over the movie.
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That was actually a pretty good sprite movie. I like the idea of choosing an ending. The graphics were pretty good, except some of the text during the conversation (espeically Mario's) was kind of hard to read. The sound was good. Overall, this was a pretty good sprite movie.
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Err... okay, it was just a picture and a song. The drawing wasn't vry good, but the song is awesome. Next time, try and submit something that isn't a still image.
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The graphics were pretty good. The sound was pretty good too. However, it wasn't very funny, and overall it felt a little bit rushed. It was very short, maybe next time you should include more than one short.
6/10
~ Z
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Well, it wasn't a bad claymation. I didn't really get it though; was he supposed to climb up the window coverings or what? Also, the camera was a bit fuzzy, try and improve that next time. The intro was also a little long.
6/10
~ Z
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Well it was really random, and kind of interesting, I'll tell you that. However, the grapihcs were bad and it got really repetitive after a while; I couldn't tell if it was a loop or not! The music was pretty good, as well. A little bit more effort and this could have been pretty cool. But for now it's just a bunch of shapes flying all over the place.
4/10
~ Z
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Ok, it was cool, but it would have been a lot better if O's disn't pop up in random boxes all over the place. Having one box that you could just play in would have been better. Still though, great graphics and music, cool introudction, and a great idea.
4/5
~ Z
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Thanks for your review!
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