Frenzy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Doodle-Time]

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The music was pretty good in this flash, and the style of this flash wasn't bad, either. You had a pre-loader (which I like), a 'PLAY button, and a 'REPLAY' button, too, which are all good things to have in a flash. The 'subtitles' ( :p) were pretty much right on cue with the lyrics of the song, too.

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Well, some of the graphics were pretty messy (I know it's supposed to be Doodles, but still).

2/5

KapKyle responds:

Yeah, I think it's obvious I didn't put a TON of work into the drawing. I'll work on my drawing so my next flash won't be as messy. Thanks for the nice, long review! :)

[Yoshi's Tutorial]

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The graphics weren't bad in this flash, and I really liked the music. You had the option to turn it off, too, which is a good addition. Also, I like how you tried to spruce up the tutorial by using sprites.

+IMPROVING+:

Well, the menu was kind of messy, and you probably could have given the flash a more polished look.

2/5

Bomber109 responds:

Yeah, I'm not a graphics master.

[Jake]

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The graphics and style were pretty good in this movie; everything ran very smoothly. The music was pretty good, too, and fit teh theme of the flash. You had a pre-loader, 'PLAY', and 'REPLAY' buttons, too, which are good things to have.

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Well, it didn't really have a plot, and maybe you could make it longer (and have a plot, too)...?

2/5

Renegade-Hamster responds:

I don't know. Maybe it turns out that the ball is actually Jake's father? Now THAT'S plot.

[[2005] Yesterday Collab]

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Most of these parts were petty good, espeically Flash-Clock's (as the last reviewer wrote, he probably had the best overall part). The sound was petty good, too, and the graphics and style werent' bad, either. gave humour a 1 because of StrawberryClock... lol.

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Well, the first part (also as the last reviewer wrote) was probably the worst part. Also, maybe a menu would be helpful, like the seperate , and then a 'Play All' button...?

2/5

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

I woudlve added now a menu,but its easy to be wise afterwards.

[Ultimate Trailer]

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I like the muisc in the credits of this flash, and you had a 'PLAY' button, which is a good thing.

+IMPROVING+:

The voices were very hard to hear (except when the voice said, n00bnation), and maybe you could have amde it longer...? Oh, and what happened?

2/5

N00bNation responds:

This movie or perhaps series will happen. But its put on hold.

[GAY SHIT 15]

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The graphics and style were pretty good in this, and, ocne again, I like the music. The pre-loader was pretty cool, too.

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Well, I feel that this series is starting to lose it's humour... do something unpredicable!

2/5

TheSoulMan responds:

Uh, I suck =(

[Roflmasta & BBQbeefburger]

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Well, the graphics and style of this movie weren't bad (I like the way Bbqbeefburgerman looks), and the voices were kind of cool, too. I like that 'End' sound, and you ahd a pre-laoder, which isa good thing.

+IMPROVING+:

Maybe you could just make it longer...?

2/5

.frenZy.

Roflmasta responds:

k n_n

[10 Seconds Mario]

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Woah. Anyway, the graphics and style were pretty good in this flash, and the music was pretty good, too (I like System of a Down!). Also, there were lots of buttons and stuff.

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Maybe you could have made it even mroe fast-paced, like it shows each idnivdual Koopa. Maybe a number counter to show what Koopa Mario's on, too, just to show how fast-paced the movie REALLY is.

2/5

.frenZy.

Casualty responds:

Thanks for the review dude!
I couldn't really have made it faster, because it already went really fast, and I wanted people to see something of the movie, not just some flashing dude flying over the screen. And I think it would've been boring if there was only one koopa at the time.
But thanks!

[Bbq-ish happenings at bar]

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Although I don't quite know what happened, I found it kind of funny! The graphics and style were pretty cool, and the sound wasn't bad, either. The pre-loader was pretty cool, and I love that 'End' noise!

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Well, why did BBqbeefburgerman put the box over his head? Anyway, maybe just make it a little longer...?

3/5
(Protected)

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Bbq likes box's. Thats why.

[Television : the movie]

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The sound was pretty good in this flash, and some of it was kind of funny.

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Well, the graphics and style could use some improving, and maybe you could have made it logner (like the two of them actually stumble into a T.V. Station...?).

2/5

murfynation responds:

Could you be a little more discriptive about howi can improve . I dont think eric and I getting off the couch would be very fun . Its a parody of the tv not a parody of the tv station , although i could totally make fun of fox . Wait for the second one , cause i had too much fun with this one .