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+COMMENTS+:
Well, I guess this is kind of unique, and the graphics and style weren't bad... you had a pre-loader, too, which is a good thing.
+IMPROVING+:
Well, besides the background, and fonts you used in the game, it really had nothing to do with Newgrounds. I guess that's not a huge complaint, though... aslo, maybe adding your own words in, for other people to use, would be cool, too (BBS competition :o).
2/5