Okay then...
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The graphics and style of this movie were pretty good, and the voice and music were pretty good, too. The voices were (from what I could tell) pretty much right on cue with the movement of the speaking characters mouth.
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Well, first of all, where is the first part of this? It's not udner your submissions. Also, I didn't really understand what was happening (which may or may not be a good thing).
3/5
You know, I honestly question wether or not part 1 would survive blamming, but tell you what... I'm gonna try it. Why not?
Understanding what's happening would be amazing, and if you can reach that point, enlighten the rest of us. XD Basically, random guys get mauled by other people to RPG battle scene and music. D: 'Cause I thought it was funny.
Kind of Weird
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The subtitles were right on cue with the lyrics in the song, and the graphics and style weren't bad. The sound wasn't bad, either.
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It was kind of werid, as the title of this review may suggest, and it was the same thing over and over again.
2/5
I find it natural.
Kind Of Sick, But Still Pretty Good
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The graphics and style were very good in this movie. Having them walk on a background that was coloured with crayons (am I right?), looked cool and unique. The sound was right on cue, and there were bo jerky movements.
+IMPROVING+:
Well, it was too short, and the Newgrounds pre-laoder didn't work; it just went right on too the 'Click To Begin' thing.
3/5
The bg was drawn with cheap coloured pencils. As were the gfx for the Timing-based shooter.
The pre-loader does work - I specifically changed the programming to make it go to my own screen. Why should folk have to click to play twice?
Glad you enjoyed what it was.
Stay funky!
JELLO!!
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This was pretty funny, actually.
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It's a loop, there is no sound, no plot, basically no graphics, but still...
1/5
JELLO PUBBIN
Not Bad, Actually
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The graphics and style of this movie were actually pretty good. I like the font you used, and at least you had voices...
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...however, those voices were, sometimes, hard to hear. It was too short, and what was going on?
2/5
if you payed attention to the dialouge of the movie, you might've made out what they were saying and what the movie was about.
seriously, the whole god damn plot was in subtitles. do I need to write a transcript or a sypnosis for you? you could also read the commentary quote.
Not Bad, I Guess
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The graphics and style of this movie were, once again, pretty good. The music, sound effects, and Speakonia voices were all pretty good, too. Also, I like how you attempted to spice up the Newgrounds pre-laoder by making it fade at the end. It was somewhat funny, too.
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Well, it was kind of too short...
2/5
hehe thanks.
this was my first lock animation so it is not as good as my others.
Not as Good as Some of your Other Submissions
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The graphics and style weren't abd in this I guess, and it was kind of funny.
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The voices were hard to ehar at some points, and there wasn't really very much animation to this at all. Also, what happened to the 'Lock Legion' pre-loader (althugh I notice that the infmaous 'PALY' is still there :).
2/5
yeah this was a rushed project and back then my skills were a lot less then those other submissions.
thanks anyway
Pretty Good, Actually!
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The graphicss and style of this movie were pretty good, and the sound was great (I like Speakonia a lot!). This flash was kind of funny, too.
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I reaize this is an unfinished project, but I have to mention these things: the subtitles stopped at the end, and there is no 'REPLAY' button.
3/5
thanks.
seems you're on a review rampage XD
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