Agh!
--The Good--
Well, the menu looked nice, and I liked the beginning when the 'Newgrounds' picture fell down. That was very cool. The graphics were pretty cool, and the style of this game was great. There was tons of interactivity in this... the different puzzles, and other things (the menu), and probably even more!
--The Improvement-Needing--
Well, first ofall, I can't figure out what you're supposed to do in those annoying puzzles! I didn't really understand any of them... except for three, which I kind of just gave up on. I didn;t try all of them, but they are very hard! Maybe a hint in the various puzzle arenas, or some instructions on what to do in the different puzzles...? Maybe even a difficulty selection..? Just some suggestions. This game wasn't funny at all, althought that isn't really a big deal. The sound in this game was pretty good, but there wasn't really a lot of it... as far as I know there is only sound in puzzle #10 (although I didn't try all of the different puzzles). Also, there wasn't really much violence in this flash, which probably isn't a big deal (althought there was a tiny bit.... I think :p).
--Overall--
Overall, I think that this is a great flash, but it is nearly impossible to do some of these puzzles. I'm pretty sure you wanted to make it hard, so congratulations on that! I tihnk it definately needs some improving(maybe some instructions, or a hint in the various puzzle arenas, or maybe even some various difficulty levels...?) Anyway, good job, but it's very hard! So, I guess, good job!